Start and Stop Poetry

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In the Auttum

Its getting colder

Gently the brownish leaves fall down to the ground

Mess is made outside my door

you can hear crunches as you step through them as if you are a monster trying to hurt them

I have to go grab the dusty old rake to sweep up the leaves

In the Auttum

 

 

At the center of my heart

Theres a love for everyone I know

Theres love and words that I never describe

Theres passions and dreams all to be shared

All of these will always be there

At the center of my heart

 

 

When i am asleep

My eyes are firmly shut

My blankets and doonas are pieling on top of me to keep me warm

Dreams scatter through my head with each and everyone so valuable

I hope that a night mare will never come to mind

When i am asleep

 

 

Now i’m finished my race

A beaming smile speads across my face

Proudness overfills me and its a big achievement

My legs ache of pain as i walk over to the stands to see my parents crying of joy as they are definatly very proud

I will never forget to shake the other athletes hands as they have done so well

Now im finished my race

 

 

When the sun rises

Its a new day

I’m refreshed and ready

Outside my window its not dark and gloomy just a bright yellow sun smiling at me

The once dark sky turns orangey blue

When the sun rises

When you achieve your goal

You are speechless

Alot of thoughts come to mind but you push them aside and celebrate your achievement

You now know that you can dream and definatly believe in yourself

You hope that you will always get this feeeling

When you achieve your goal

When the laughter

I was out of breath

My throat was itching for water as i had been laughing for ages

My checks were pink and blushed but i dont mind

Everybody definatly went quiet

When the laughter stopped

 

 

5 thoughts on “Start and Stop Poetry

  1. Hi Meg
    I was on your blog having a read and when I read your start and stop poems well I thought that you really set the scene well. I believe that you are a real poet and that I could read them any day.
    Bella

  2. I read all your Start and Stop poems and they were amazing and it was very descriptive!
    Autum is a great season because it can be hot and cold and you were right all the leaves fall down I front of your door. I wonder how many leaves fall daily in Victoria?

    Emma

  3. Hi Meg,
    You have left me speechless, those start and stop poems were amazing! Autumn is a great season as we get to see the leaves change colour. The only thing I would have to say would be make sure to re-read over and check spelling but otherwise I can’t really say much more! Great Job Meg!

    Ella Xx

  4. Hey Meg,
    I think that you have done some amazing start and stop poems. I especially like your at the centre of my heart poem because I can tell that you have really thought about the words that you have used and it really did come from the centre of you heart. When I clicked on your start and stop poems I couldn’t believe how many ideas you had come up with because I found it very challenging to think of even my first one. Anyway I think you have done an outstanding job and I look forward to seeing more of your amazing work through out the year.
    Katexx

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